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hi,
This is one of my OCs . I created myself these clothes and I find the result quite cool ^^
Any suggestions on how to liven up the character are welcome. Also, any advice on anatomy is welcome. Red-lines are appreciated. I feel like there is no effect of shadow with this kind of clothes so if someone could show me with red-lines how to fix it that will be really kind ...
This is one of my OCs . I created myself these clothes and I find the result quite cool ^^
Any suggestions on how to liven up the character are welcome. Also, any advice on anatomy is welcome. Red-lines are appreciated. I feel like there is no effect of shadow with this kind of clothes so if someone could show me with red-lines how to fix it that will be really kind ... Image size
2496x3496px 1.92 MB
Make
Canon
Model
CanoScan LiDE 110
Date Taken
Oct 11, 2016, 10:33:57 AM
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Very nice drawing! I allways think it's so difficult to develope one's own characters, so great work!
I think there is nothing actually wrong with the proportions, meaning to say, that there could be a person proportioned just the way he is. There are a few things that are "not average" about him. This is of course part of the personality you give him, so if you did those intentionally, you shouldn't change a thing:
- The hands are very large in proportion to his face. My thumb-rule is, one hand is as large as half a face.
- In proportion to his height he has rather slim shoulders
- In proportion to his overall height he has very long legs and a rather short upper body
- The eyes are very large, especially for a men and give him a slight feminine touch.
All in all, I think this is a great drawing. I think you do need more shading however, currently this is a mixture between line-art (especially on his shirt) and more detailed shading (like on his waste coat). If you used the kind of shading you did on the waste coat more consistently, I think this would help give the drawing more depth.
I think there is nothing actually wrong with the proportions, meaning to say, that there could be a person proportioned just the way he is. There are a few things that are "not average" about him. This is of course part of the personality you give him, so if you did those intentionally, you shouldn't change a thing:
- The hands are very large in proportion to his face. My thumb-rule is, one hand is as large as half a face.
- In proportion to his height he has rather slim shoulders
- In proportion to his overall height he has very long legs and a rather short upper body
- The eyes are very large, especially for a men and give him a slight feminine touch.
All in all, I think this is a great drawing. I think you do need more shading however, currently this is a mixture between line-art (especially on his shirt) and more detailed shading (like on his waste coat). If you used the kind of shading you did on the waste coat more consistently, I think this would help give the drawing more depth.